Revised Idea #3 [Mary]

Section 1 -  

• Over the shoulder shots of the girl writing a note, mise-en scene of a girls bedroom, band poster, desk with a mirror on and school books etc.
• Slow shots at the beginning. Nearer 1 or 2 seconds.
• The girl is dressed in white, with pale skin and lots of eye make-up.
• The girl packs her bag in a hurry
• Walks through the house, there are broken plates, turned over furniture etc in the background.
• Close up of the girls hand on the door handle as she is leaving.
• Close-ups of the girls face with watering eyes.
• Long shot of her running away from the house.
• Shots from a car. 
• Jumpy shots.

Section 2 - (guitar solo)

• Close-ups of instruments. Fret boards, strings, microphones, bass drum etc.
• Shots of her collapsing down - jump
• Girl reaches out to people.
• Backlit shots of the band playing.
• Flashing lights
• Urban night shots
• High angle shots of her isolation, exposure and vulnerability etc. 
• Low angle shot of the guitarist
• Flashbacks of an argument?

Section 3 -

• More shots of isolation and vulnerability. It's getting late and she still has nowhere to go.
• Have the ending of the girl sat on a wall, next shot is a train going past, then she is gone. Has she jumped into the tracks? Or has she walked off? Diagetic noise of the train.  Needs testing!
• Performance shots.