Revised Draft Of Our Idea

• After getting into our group, we discussed our ideas that we had and brainstormed to see if we could add anything new and improved it and also look into a little more detail at what the video would include. 

This is what we came up with... (

This is taken from Mary's blog [http://mary-jenner-musicvid.blogspot.com/2010/11/my-pitch.html])

• "A girl is packing her bag in a hurry, running away from home but when she is doing this she is getting more and more frustrated and emotional.

• When the chorus drops the band are shown in a quite claustrophobic location, maybe in a garage or something
• The girl writes a note explaining why she no longer can stay at home and the reason as to why she is running away (independence etc)
• She then leaves , walks out of the house, lots of shot variation of her walking/running through the streets, lots of special effects
• Then she starts to get more emotional when she realizes she has nowhere to go and that she has made a big mistake.
• The video ends with narrative enigma, a shot of the girl on a wall then a train goes past then the girl is gone.
• There will be performance shots of the band throughout."